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Beauty of the Beast

Title - Beauty of the Beast

Author - @Essence_of_Life

Genre - Short Story

Its time for the ratings...

Title - The title is beautiful in its name. But when I first saw the title without knowing anything about the story I thought that is something like that Disney movie ' Beauty and the Beast ' but it was actually whole opposite. I give 2/5

Cover - As said before about the title confusion the cover has a red background that looks like it is a romance novel. And joining the movie concept and the cover thing no one will believe that its not a love story. I give 2/5

Plot - Well... Plot was amazing in its own way. I don't think that anyone would be having a book based on animal's point of view. So it was unique too. I give 4/5

Overall Story - The story was short as only 13 chapters were there and that too small ones. So you should increase the story length with maybe extra description. Paragraph length was good but somewhere you just didn't stopped and kept moving on. There were no spelling mistakes either.

You also explained that what was a chute but at the last of the chapter. It is actually good that you explained about that but in between the story, readers may get confused so in the starting you should add a picture.

The title is Beauty of the Beast and as said above about that movie ' Beauty and the Beast ', I was just relating the 2 stories as the story went on. But at the last I realised the real meanings of both the words.

Ending was really beautiful and I could actually relate the bull's story to a human's life. Means enjoying the previous life but then separating from parents and working and at last retirement.

Overall rating - 2.5/5

Reviewer - @Passionofwriting

Improve the points so your story will be better.

Keep writing !