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Love washed ashore

Oh my my!
Lovely story 😍
@lishaak
Hey there!
The awesome writer of this story.
I love you <3
And this story <3

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RATINGS-
🎈COVER
I LOVED YOUR COVER . LMAO
sorry. I know i made this cover hehe.
So no ratings xD

🎈TITLE - LOVE WASHED ASHORE
🌸PERFECT 🌸
4/5

🎈PLOT
I thought that this must be a boring and cliche romantic story.
Alas, you proved me wrong.
Just put up something interesting and eye catching in the space provided for 'story details'.
3.5/5

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Coming up to the story, my god, it is simply amazing.
Ignoring all the grammatical mistakes, wrong sentence formation and some more stuff, i give the storyline 4/5.
No need to make any changes in the storyline. Just work on -
1. Grammatical mistakes - dear, just go through the story once . You'll find a lot of grammatical mistakes.
2. you started the story as ' I '. But after 1st chapter you wrote the story as a third person. Either write in the form of 'I' or write it in the other way, i.e as a 3rd person.
3. Break the chapter in paragraphs.
It would give a good impression to the reader.
4. Those lines after the letter, in which you've written how the protagonist felt, should be filled with some more emotions. A little more detailing how she felt.
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Those letters were super emotional.
Superb job done.
10/10 for those letters 💖💓💓💓💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞

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I will personally recommend your book and publicize it among my friends once you've edited it .

I Hope this review was helpful.
And yes,
A small gift from my side. (for this awesome story)

I hope you like it 💞
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Reviewer- navikaur373
Plus, I'm sorry if you found my review harsh. Don't kill me please ~puppy eyes~