Mr. Richie Rich and Ms. Popular

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Title - Mr. Richie Rich and Ms. Popular

Author - @this_is_her

So... chemistry between Mr. Richie Rich and Ms. Popular Interesting...

Title - The title is very much different from all other wattpad stories I have read. It seems like he is rich and she is popular. I give 4.5/5

Cover - Well... I can see only Miss Popular conquering the cover so you should add Richie Rich too. Otherwise the cover looks good and proffesional typo. I give 4.7/5

Plot - The plot is interesting actually. As the story is moving ahead it is getting more and more interesting. I was not able to stop. I give 4/5

Oh ! I forgot to mention that when I read the title, I could remember 2 things -
1. That cartoon named Richie Rich.
2. A boy in my colony whose nickname is Richie. 😂😂😂

Hey ! That was not to be mentioned !

I thought that the story would be starting with a chemistry project but that doesn't happened. Instead in a college or high school. Wait ! You didn't mentioned that where they were and if you mentioned then I forget things easily.

In the bar funny things happened but in these happenings I easily got confused that who was Ryan, Ian, Lisa and all. You should write atleast twice or thrice or the readers will forget easily.

Grammar mistakes - Rare
Paragraph spacing - Okay
Spelling mistakes - Not at all
Got bored - Who said that ?
Keep writing - Surely !

Reviewer - @Passionofwriting

Byeeee !

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