THINGS WRONG WITH THE WALKING DEAD FANFICS
boyfriend drama▼
I looketh and gaspzed, becucx uh hu, it be brad, the ol' razzle dazzle kicks in
"My oh my" I exlaimethBrad smirks and he slaps me and Carl steps in "refrain" he speaks I. A voice deeper than god "what says brad"
"REFRAIN" screeches Carl "REFRAIN REFRAIN REFRAI-"
Okay, this is very overused. It's kind of written in just when Tiffany and Carl are settling in, and, dundundun, Brad, the ex boyfriend comes waltzing in like he owns the place to claim Tiffany back. And, what's more, is that Brad is basically an abusive boyfriend who looks like a model.
~ BONUS POINTS ~
when Brad makes Tiffany be anorexic so Carl helps her through it.Anyways, Brad, actually fuck off you piece of cunt. Nobody likes the boyfriend coming back from the dead drama. It's cliché and stupid. It's just plot filler. It's also lazy, because out of everything else you could choose to do in a zombie apocalypse you picked the one thing you can do in a high school AU.
Hey, you, writing a book like this. I have one thing to say to you;
REFRAIN
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Some of you guys know my original zombie book, "Madness." It was put on hold, but it's coming back, but on my second account. It's kinda messy to have originals and fanfics on one account, so the second account is for originals.
Anyways, it would mean so much if you guys checked it out ( -conciliate ), because I'm working so hard on the book. Thank you guys lots
~ Aimee x
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Things wrong with the Walking Dead fanfics
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