Flashlight *COMPLETED*

Chapter 9

*Comet tail's POV*

After Twilight broke up with me,Celestia told me that she wasn't okay with Twilight's new decision (I didn't know what it was)until she found out that I wasn't a real prince,she kicked me out of the castle and told everypony about it.I lost my home,my cash,my life was ruined,and i suddenly felt guilty for what I did.

I lived in an apartment,used half of my remaining money,and used the rest for a lifetime supply of food.i became fatter and uglier. I got fatter cause I did nothing but eat the good food at my apartment and watched tv,I also became uglier cause I was broke and I didn't get to have my monthly mane cut.few weeks later I was kicked out of my apartment and lived in an abandoned coffee shop, I had nothing but uncooked tuna and the other horrible veggies stuck for me to eat.so one day,I went to the bar to drink some whiskey,I drank about 30 bottles that night,then some ponies started noticing me

"Hey! It's comet FAIL!!!" -Caramel

"What are you doing here,ya fraud??? You might be a fake prince,but your still sadly a rich man,or should I say...a b**ch man!" - Berry punch

"That's dirty,but true!"-Braeburn

"Hey! My money was taken by hoboes down by the streets,it's not my fault!"-me

Everyone started laughing at me

"Hoboes!?!"-Lyra

"That's just really stupid"-Bon Bon

"Lol"-vinyl

"This is so humiliating!!!"-Octavia

":p"-derpy

"Well,that's what you deserve,after all you were a bad fiancé to princess twilight sparkle,she's a kind,loyal,sweet,caring pony,and you would just,treat her like that?"-Carrot top

"Well,how else am I going to act?"-me

"Then,cmon.let's sit here"-carrot top

"What are you gonna do?"-me

"I'm just gonna ask you some questions,and give you some pointers on how to be a better pony."-carrot top

So me and carrot top started talking a little

"So,how did you treat Twilight?"

"I tell her to buy stuff for me, I tell her to do my work,and I tell her to do stuff for me."

"Why the heck would you do that???"

"Cause that's what wives do anyways,besides she dosen't complain"

"Still,that's kinda rude.now lemme give you some pointers"

We talked and talked for hours an hours,she gave really helpful pointers.i asked her how she knew about all of that,she said it was a secret and it should kept like that forever.I finally know how to be better now,so I thanked carrot top,left the bar,and headed back to the crystal castle

I rushed miles and miles away,until I finally arrived. The guards wouldn't let me in,but I insisted them,they said to make it quick.i ran to her room and knocked on the door,then Twilight answered

"Comet Tail? What are you doing here?"

"I want to talk to you for a sec"

"Umm...I don't know...I don't feel like trusting you..."

"CMON,give me a chance..."

"Hmm...okay,I'll give you one more chance,but make it count"

She let me in,then we started talking

"So...why are you here?"

"I just wanna say that I'm so sorry for what I've done and how I've been acting,I wanna make it up to you by taking you out on a date,tonight at the le stallioñ restaurant at 6:00pm"

"Umm...I don't know...I haven't known known you a lot...since we broke up and all,it would be kinda awkward..."

"it's not awkward,it's okay..."

"But....but I barely even know you...celestia just forced me to be with you...plus...ugh never mind..."

"Wait,what were you gonna say?"

"Nothing,I don't wanna tell you..."

"I knew it,you're keeping something from me! What is it???"

"I said I don't wanna tell you! I'm keeping it a secret,and you're starting to be very rude again!"

Suddenly,the royal guards busted the door and started dragging me out of the room and out of the castle,but before I left, I told twilight "I will find out sooner or later,I won't stop stalking you until I do so! Mark my words,princess twilight sparkle! I will find out..."