Throne

Growing up

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King came to sugandhi"my Queen! If I am in your position I too will feel same and panicked, when Rajguru informed me I was shivering but once sit in my place and think, will you not keep me away from worry? When you knew it was Mandakini who did conspiracy with letter in rajkumars function you didn't hid it from me so that I won't be one in pain and trouble? I came to you on that day remember whole night we were talking only about Manik, that day I came to know about injury, I sent rajvaidyji and herbs too, when they returned they said Manik is fit and fine, I wanted you to see Manik with your eyes and know how he is before I inform you so that you won't loose your sanity, as I loosed on that day, please forgive me my love. My intention is to protect you nothing else please" he begged

"You don't know how much I love my children"
"I know and I love you more than my children do you know that?" He said wiping her tears hugging her softly. "I promise you I will protect him with me life not only him, I will protect you too" he kissed forehead
"You gamble with words" she said with pout
He laughed "and you love my charm" she giggled. King is relaxed immediately

Manik is weak still, so his mother called vaidya ji and asked him to make him healthy, he gave some medicines, she made sure that he take medicines properly even in marriage work busy. She never let him away from her sight for long time. Manik felt annoyed but agreed.

Nandini came to mahal again, seeing her again Manik felt more comfortable and challenging, he always had eyes on her, gazing her from distant watching her every move and action gave him fun, he laughed when she laughs, he pouts when she did, she became source of ray in his life, his serious life became colourful with her nature.

Marriage happened like last time, Manik both sisters are gone to sasural, now his mother and him are sitting and recollecting best times with girls, king joined them
"Both girls were lively and colourful to mahal, when we will see them back again we don't know, how to live like this" king said. They were gloomy

Next day king called all his sons to ground "now show me what you learnt in Gurukul all these while and who impress me I will give them this horse who is fastest one in our kingdom he is so talented that he will make you proud come on go change and come" king said. All his sons left.

After returning king first made them run whole ground, then made them do surya namaskaar, then gave them some rest and started competition among themselves.they fought with some soldiers, then they played kabadi with soldiers, they ran for target, lastly arrow shouting id been arranged.

Giridhar came proudly and shouted arrow exactly on target, then other two came they too did but minor difference. Giridhar is proud of himself, then finally Manik came he took two arrows and aimed them, one hit the target perfectly and the other one made its way while parting the first arrow perfectly half. All around them started clapping and shooting ohohihoh in happiness. Even king started clapping with proud,

Girdhar face fell, he is again angry and when tried to attack Manik king signalled solider to keep him away from Manik.
"Rajkumar Giridhar your this aggressive behaviour is not accepted, you deserve punishment, you didn't learn from your guru so let me harsh on you, run whole ground 100 times without any break food and water, then tomorrow whole day you will kneel infront of Rajkumar Manik kaksh. You will write an apology letter, if Rajkumar Manik forgives you then you will be free if not it's his choice of punishment will be granted. About today's winner is Rajkumar Manik so this horse is his now" king declared, all clapped with pride.