Her Secret ~Sunny_17_xoxo

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Title: Her Secret

Pages: 18 pages

Genre: Historical Fiction

Status: COMPLETED

Rate: PG

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   This was a cute historical short story, and I liked the idea of witchcraft. Cassiopeia is a great character, and I really liked her spells. The spells weren't too shabby, an important quality of a witch thus creating a stable character. The character of Jinx was quite comical, and I liked the little fox :3 Your foreshadowing was simple and short, and it didn't dwell too much on the past history, only giving the reader some knowledge that was important. 

   The only thing I would say about this book is that the plot starting after she realized something was following her felt rushed. I thought there could've been a gap in time, maybe a few hours, to make things seem logical, then her familiar could've spilled the beans to her. 

Rating: 3.9 OUT OF 5

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