Title: Make Me Yours, Mr. Wrong
Length: 64 pages+
Genre: Romance / Chick-Lit
Status: COMPLETED
Rate: R
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Checking out the book cover, I figured this would be something scandalous and mysterious (two words that popped in my head!). I liked how Alice was a hard-working girl but a little shy, so I loved seeing her being tossed in the most random situations. As for Proffesor Lewis, well, he was something~ XD I liked how you made him into a cold-minded character (kinda like an anime appeal). You do capture the intense moments between the characters or just one alone :) Speaking of random situations, I also like the pace of the story: I was on the 4th chapter and the plotline was steady. As for the representation of the format, it looked formal and professional. Kudos on the lack of grammatical errors, too~! ^^ I've noticed that you are currently editing this, so maybe you'll catch those other mistakes. Everything in this story is fine, and if you want to tweak up some sections, it'll be better~
Sorry this review was written much time after! >.<
Rating: 5 out of 5
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