Title: Snow
Length: 4 pages
Genre: Fantasy Romance
Status: COMPLETED
Rate: PG
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It's a cute short story. A story about a normal girl just playing in the snow when she bumps into a nice guy is bound to have someone reading more, just out of curiosity. Your grammar is great, a great factor that makes any story readable! I love how there's different events going around the story, it's like a mini movie!
The thing is, it's fast-paced and you're skipping over good stuff and descriptions, like when they hang out at the coffee shop and when Alli gets attacked at the now-barren festival, for instance, by the wolves. There could've been paragraphs instead of the huge columns of words, but maybe you could tweak up the structure of the story, then that'd be great~ Overall, this is a splended short story!
Rating: 3 out of 5
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