Title: When Opposites Attract
Length: 3 pages+
Genre: Cliche Romance
Status: ONGOING
Rate: PG-13
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While reading your summary, I thought your idea of the odd combo of mustard and ketchup was a creative idea, yet since would plan itself to be a cliche story, I hope this theme wouldn't get lost into that cliche-story. Also, reading the two chapters reminded me of an anime serial. It reminded me of that because it's the way the romance is building up and it's pretty cheesy :3 It's nothing bad, almost anyone can get a quick read out of this. I would highly suggest to add more detail and action than just teenagers talking with each other, and you should also fix a lot of grammar misakes in your story. It makes a book more clean and the emotions from the book appear more clearly. So overall, "When Opposites Attract" is a work-in-progress, but I think with some major improvements, this'll become a popularly-known romance novel :3
Sorry this review took so long! ^^"""
Rating: 3.7 out of 5
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