This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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It's an early update..!! Actually thought of giving an update after 3 days lekin realize hua ki phir se classes mein busy ho jaongi. Weekend pe you guys could enjoy the story..!!
ManVeer OS - Realization: https://www.wattpad.com/story/248229392-manveer-os-realization
ManVeer OS - Diwali Night: https://www.wattpad.com/story/249321173-manveer-os-diwali-night
Please do shower some LOVE and APPRECIATION..!!
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Cook: Maaf kijiye Rajkumari Sa. Aap ki smoothie bhi har subah Bai Sa Hukum banati hai. (She gestures him to go.)
Unnati: Oh my god yeh baat toh hume pata bhi nahi tha.
Giriraj: Aaj Manyata niche aa kar kuch kiya nahi iss liye hume pata chala hai warna hume kabhi yeh baat pata bhi nahi hoti. (Unnati nods in agreement.)
In ManVeer Room, Uday just returns from gym while Manyata is still sleeping, he takes a quick shower and sits beside Manyata. She looks really beautiful with little sunrays peeping into room.
Uday: (thinks) (watching her sleep) Gosh.. She is so beautiful. Agar aisa hi chalta raha toh princess aage-aage bahut glow karegi. I can't wait for you, baby. Daddy loves Mamma and you. (slowly Manyata opens her eyes, yawning) (to Manyata) Good Morning Princess. (caressing her tummy) Good Morning Baby.
Manyata: (groggily) Good Morning..! (she hugs him and realizes that he is just in towel.) Aap itne subah utt gaye?
Uday: Princess it's 8.30 AM. Aap late uti hai. (Manyata gets up with a jerk.) Careful..! Abhi aise jatt se utna mana hai. 😊
Manyata: Sorry woh main late hoon. Oh no!! Mujhe sab ke liye breakfast banana hai. Main abhi jaake unhe sorry keh ke bana deti hoon. (She gets up hurriedly but Uday catches her wrist to stop her.)
Uday: Dad aur Chotti already breakfast kar chuke hai. Humare liye breakfast upar aata hi hoga. (Manyata nods) Waise aaj hume ek hi meeting hai. Uske baad kahi bahar chale?
Manyata: (excitedly) Sach mein free ho? (Uday nods) Toh phir hum bahar kahi ice-cream kha sakthe hai? (He nods in agreement) Yay!! (She goes to freshen up with a big smile.)
(Uday arranges the breakfast on tea table. There are dishes both from vegetarian and non-vegetarian. Manyata comes in a bathrobe and sits to have breakfast while Uday is busy filling her plate.)
Manyata: Uday main aur nahi kha paongi. ☹
Uday: Ahaan.. Sirf yeh aakhiri piece that's it. Iske aage nahi khilayenge. (Manyata eats it keeping many expressions. Just then her phone rings indicating 'Vj Bhai', she picks up and keeps in loud speaker.)
Imagine Manyata giving these type of expressions..!!
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