This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Next day, Uday gets upset as he thinks Manyata doesn't know about his birthday being tomorrow as he never shared with her. Meanwhile Manyata is tensed as her gift has not delivered yet. At night around 11.45 PM, Manyata tiptoes to check the arrangement making sure not to disturb sleeping Uday. She slowly wakes up Uday by getting small chocolate cake.
Manyata: (slowly) Happy Birthday to you. Happy Birthday Uday. (he wakes up, clearly surprized.) Chalo wish mango aur candle bujao.. Tumhare liye khaas sugar-free cake taaki tumhe extra gym karne ki zarurat na pade.. (he wishes for their togetherness forever and blows it.) (innocently, puppy eyes) Waise Sorry tumhara gift abhi tak deliver nahi hua per tumhare birthday ke last minute tak toh mil jayega. Haa per ek aur gift hai jo abhi yahan hai.
Uday: Thank you 😊 Okay, To dusra gift do (showing his hand)
Manyata: Itni aasani se toh nahi. Mehnat karna padega. Ha tumhara birthday hai is liye discount mein hint deti hoon. Woh gift personal hai aur ek aise jagah pe hai jahan sirf tumhara haq hai. Socho-Socho.
Uday: Personal hai aur sirf humara haq hai. (smirks) Princess, Kahi humari izzat loot ne ki plan mein toh nahi hona. 😉 (she widens her eyes)
Manyata: Chee Uday tum kitne besharam ho. (beats little) theek hai tumhara birthday hai is liye last hint. (sets her engagement ring. Uday takes her hand and removes the ring, he gets tears in his eyes as she gets a tattoo of his name on her left ring finger.) Achcha nahi hai kya..
Uday: (hugs her tightly) Achcha nahi bahut achcha hai lekin bahut dard hua hoga na I mean woh needle chub jaata hai.
Imagine Uday instead of the design..!
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Manyata: Bilkul dard nahi hua us wakt main tumhare baare mein soch rahi thi. (a teardrop falls on her head) Are tum ro rahe ho. Uday main tumhe khush karne ke liye banwaya aur tum aise ro rahe ho. Chalo bahar aur arrangements ki hai maine. (in balcony, She opens i-pad.) Tumhare sab se khaas insaan se birthday wishes nahi loge kya?? (plays a video in which his mother is wishing him) (jokes) Ab phir se rona shuru mat karna mere paas hanky bhi nahi hai. (he chuckles) Aur ab time a gaya hai tumhare favourite ki. (handing a champagne bottle, he raises an eyebrow) haa main nahi peeti toh kya hua, ise khol toh sakthi hoon na..
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