This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
Thi...
Manyata is still upset over club incident.. I guess whenever Manyata goes to club, something happens..!!
Anyways let's get into the story..!!
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Uday: Princess.. Khaana khao.. Hum thodi der mein stable jayenge. Wahan khaana ke liye kuch nahi milega. (Manyata doesn't respond and is towards window, Uday turns her to find her crying very badly, she hugs him.)
Manyata: Maine tumhe (hiccups) tumhe money (hiccups) ke liye shaadi nahi (hiccups) ki hai. Mein gold (hiccups) gold digger nahi hoon..(hiccups) (He breaks the hug.)
Uday: Kisne kaha ki tum ne hum se paison ke liye shaadi ki hai? Princess Tasha ne kuch.. (angrily) Hum use jail mein daal denge.. How dare she?
Manyata: Tumhe nahi lagta ki maine tum se money ke liye..(hiccups) I mean you don't believe ki mein.. (He hugs her to comfort her but is actually very angry)
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Uday: I will never believe whatever they say.. Okay (He feeds her. Unnati walks in..)
Unnati: Oops.. Maine kuch dekha. Thank God maine kuch ajeeb scenes nahi dekha. Khair sab log ready hai. (Manyata embarrassed, walks into washroom to fresh up. Unnati winks and leaves.)
(Later at stable, everyone excitedly looks at all horses. Manyata lost the way and ends up at Sultan, while Uday is in a call.)
Uday: Manyata kidhar hai? Chotti, Manyata aap logo ke saath hi thi na.
Unnati: Dada.. Yahi kahi hogi Manyata.. Manyata.. Oh no Kahi Sultan ke paas to nahi hai na?
Uday: Oh no.. Sultan ko gussa bahut jaldi a jayega.. Usne kabhi Manyata ko dekha bhi nahi.. (They go to Sultan's stable only to find Manyata and Sultan enjoying each other's company and Manyata giggling. Everyone is shocked.)
Imagine Sultan as this horse.. (*He is so beautiful, na??*)
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