This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
Thi...
Manyata: Mujhe first rank aaya hai? (They nod) Yay! (She jumps on sofa and twirls Sravu.) Main school topper hoon.. (She runs inside and gets lauki and does dandiya as if they are sticks. She does crazy dance in BG.)
Srawik: Viewers.. Sweety ki screw loose ho gayi hai. Next video mein milte hai. (Everyone laugh out loud.)
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Jay: Haha Jiji.. you're so funny. Aise kab tak dance kar rahi thi aap?
Manyata: Bahut der tak main aise hi pagalon ki tarah dance kar rahi thi. Pata hai Jay.. Iske baad humne ice cream party ki thi.
Its Srawik engagement party. Manyata wears a green-pink Tamilian style half saree with Gajra. Sravani wears magenta-amber Tamilian style half saree. Satwik wears a white dhoti with amber kurta. Manyata is seen all excited for her best friends engagement. She dances on Cutie Pie from ADHM..
(She does cute dance while Uday looks at her, with so much of love.) In the video, Manyata hugs Srawik and does rituals as Satwik's sister while everyone go awe. There are only Srawik family members and few close friends as Srawik are minors. (Everyone adore their bond.)
(Manyata wears a sash of Sravani and from back Satwik's friend Pavan wears a sash of Satwik while Anusha (another friend) wears a sash of Manyata.)
(If it's like this Manyata(Sravani).. Then understand that Manyata who is pretending to be Sravani doing the thing.)
Tere vargi na pind vich dooji Punjabi koi chick mahiya Kyun tu khidki te baithi sharmaaye Barande utte dikh mahiya (Anusha (Manyata) shows that Manyata (Sravani) is a pampered girl.)
Tere vargi na pind vich dooji Punjabi koi chick mahiya Kyun tu khidki te baithi sharmaaye Barande utte dikh mahiya (Anusha (Manyata) show that Manyata (Sravani) was in love with Pavan (Satwik) ever since childhood.)
Banno tashan tera ati fantastic Social media pe hukam chalaaye Phone pe baatein kare apne left hand se Right hand pe mehndi lagaaye (Pavan (Satwik) shows that he will go mad because of Manyata (Sravani). Anusha (Manyata) tries to get them close by stupid pranks.)
Banno tashan tera ati fantastic Social media pe hukam chalaaye Phone pe baatein kare apne left hand se Right hand pe mehndi lagaaye (Manyata (Sravani) and Anusha (Manyata) walk in and others bow down. They both throws tantrums at everyone while Pavan (Satwik) pampers both of them. Uday looks very amused. Others laugh on their cute banter.)
Boyfriend ki tujhe koi fikar nahi Pehli date pe kahe, okay, bye! Devdas ki tarah afsos woh kare Te tu hans ke innocent si shakal banaye (Manyata (Sravani) tells weird works to Pavan (Satwik) and when he gets scolding, she keeps an innocent face. He looks smitten by her. BG.. Srawik look embarrassed.)
