This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Let's have a look at Manyata's birthday surprize and also the most awaited Proposal of Yuvraj Udayveer Singh..!!
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They go to beach. Manyata is lost looking at waves just then someone closes her eyes, while she freaks out.
Manyata: (catches her hand) Sravu.. (takes her hand) tum yahan pe? I mean.. (they speak in Tamil while Uday silently watches them. Suddenly another man comes and pats Manyata) Satwik.. Oh my god.. Tum dono yahan pe I mean.. (they hug, she realizes Uday) Sorry.. Meet him Uday my Mama.. (They shake hands and laugh out loud)
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Uday: (whispering to Manyata) Mama matlab.. (Manyata looks confused)
Sravani: Mama matlab husband, Jeeja Ji. Sweety so bad ya.. tum ne hume bina bataye Mumbai chali gayi aur kalyanam bhi kar li. Waise tum se ache toh Jeeja Ji hai jo tumhe surprize dene ke liye yahan le aaye.. (Manyata looks at him, shocked.)
Satwik: Waise Sweety.. humne uncle se yeh sab except nahi kiya hai.. I'm happy for you ki tumhe apni asli family mil gayi hai. (Manyata smiles.)
Uday: Let's sit somewhere. (They sit in a café near beach. ManVeer and Srawik talk and Uday gels well with them.)
Sravani: Waise Sweety.. apni kalyanam ki story toh sunao. Mujhe thodi bahut pata hai jo media wale publish ki hai us mein se pad liya hai. Waise Jeeja Ji how did you make her fall for you.. I mean yeh toh pyaar ishq jaisi cheese se bhag jaati thi Yaad hai Satwik.. kaise us din humne uske dream boy qualities poocha toh aisi gussa aaya ki hum par chillane lag gayi thi.. (Manyata looks at them, horrified.)
Satwik: You remember her answer.. I want someone true and brave. Jo us pe trust kare.. Aur kya kaha tha.. One and only love for a lifetime. Ha.. 18th century love story. (Uday looks at Manyata from corner of her eyes.)
Uday: Aur kya kaha hai princess ne? (Manyata closes her eyes, downs her head)
Sravani: Nice nickname, Jeeja Ji. Waise pata hai yeh school topper thi 10th mein. Iski marks record ko todne mein 3 saal lag gaye the.. (Uday listens to them interestedly as he getting to know many things about her.)
Satwik: Hey remember is ne toh us gunde ko apna bhai bana liya tha.. (Manyata coughs badly, Uday rubs her back) You know Uday Sweety ko ek gunda aake propose kiya tha toh is ne use Anna bana liya tha. (Uday keeps what look) Anna matlab bhai. (Manyata hides behind Sravani.) Aur sab se ajeeb baat woh gunda emotional hoke rone lag gaya tha. Imagine ek body builder jaise gunda becoming emotional. (Uday, Srawik laugh out loud.)
Manyata: Are.. Woh Anna ne apni poori family kho diya tha mujhe thodi na sapna ayega ki woh mere Anna kehne per emotional hoke rone lagega.. (They laugh as she beats Srawik with her small palms.)
