This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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In Car, she sits silently lost in thoughts while he glances at her frequently. Manyata sits all lost whole day. Unay get worried as she asks to be left alone in her room.
Unnati: Manyata ko itna lost aur gloomy kabhi nahi dekha hai. Jay, kahi in dono ke beech mein phir se jhagda toh nahi hua hai na.
Jay: I think yahi hua hai. Tum Uday se baat karke toh dekho agar woh bhi gloomy ya gussa hai toh hume phir se plan banana hoga.
Unnati: Theek hai. Hum abhi un se baat karte hai. (They go to his room. He works on laptop while sipping coffee.) Dada.. aap busy ho? Hum dono yahan pe thodi der bait sakthe hai na?
Uday: Tum dono theek toh ho na. Aap dono kab se humare kamre mein aane ke liye permission maang ne lage ho? (Unay relax as he is normal.)
Jay: Aisa kuch nahi hai. Hum abhi-abhi Manyata jiji ke kamre se a rahe the. Woh bahut disturbed lag rahi thi aur use akela chod ne ke liye kaha gaya tha. (Uday snaps his head.) Aap dono ke beech mein phir se jhagda ho gaya hai kya?
(He doesn't answer but rushes to Manyata's room. Maids inform him that Manyata does not want anyone in her room and wants to be alone. He looks seriously at them.)
Uday: Manyata.. (she catches pillow and cries silently) Princess.. (hugs her.) Heart breaks hote rehte hai. He doesn't deserve you. Aap ko move on karna chahiye. (He feels bad that Manyata is crying for Aakash who betrayed her. Suddenly, Manyata hugs him.)
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Manyata: (sobbingly) tumhe lag raha hai ki main Aakash ke liye ro rahi hoon. (he breaks the hug and looks at her.) Main iss liye ro rahi hoon kyun ki meri wajah se aap sab logo ko itna kuch sehna pada. Sirf meri bewakoofi ki wajah se.. Agar mujhe pata hota ki woh itna ghatiya insaan hai toh main us se baat bhi nahi karti.. (he makes her drink water) I'm sorry Uday. Maine tumhe bahut pareshaan kiya hai. I'm sorry for everything.
Uday: Tumhe mujhe sorry kehne ki aur guilty feel karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. You know what yeh jo bhi hua hai tumhari bewakoofi ki wajah se nahi balki tumhari nadaani tha. Agar tumhari jagah koi aur hota toh yahi hota. Woh ghatiya insaan tum jaisi innocent ko kabhi deserve nahi karta. Shayad hum kuch zyada hi lucky hai kyun ki Tum jaisi achchi aur nadaan princess humari wife hai. That's why I lo.. (she looks at him) I mean I care for you. Now stop crying aur niche chalo sab tumhare liye pareshaan ho rahe hai.
(They both come down together but she is still not over the thing. Unjay, Jay plan to cheer Manyata. At dinner,)
Jay: Dadi Saab hum soch rahe the ki hum bache ghar pe movie night kar sakthe hai na? Waise bhi das din mein jiji aur Uday ki shaadi hai phir hum log busy ho jayenge.
Rajmata: Ok beta. Lekin sab log jaldi so jayiye kyun ki kal aap sab ko jewellery shopping pe jaana hai. (Unjay, Jay nod happily. They plan for a comedy movie for cheering Manyata. After dinner, youngsters watch the film interesting while Manyata is still lost. She sleeps on Uday's shoulders. Uday takes her to room but she catches his arm so tightly that he stays there.)
Next morning, Manveer positions: Manyata's head on Uday's chest and his head leaned on headrest. Manyata wake up first and makes him sleep properly. He looks like a baby while sleeping, with little stubble and cute pout. She ruffles his hair and kisses on his forehead. He wakes up but remains asleep to see her reactions.
Imagine Manyata to kiss on Uday's forehead..!
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Manyata: (thinking him to be asleep) Sote hue kitna masoom lagte ho, hamesha aise kyu nahi ho sakthe? Kaash mein tum se keh pati jo main accident se pehle tum se kehna chahti thi. Per koi nahi yeh baat shayad mere saath, mere man mein reh jaane ko hai. Jo bhi ho main tum se wada karti hoon ki tumhe hamesha khush rakhungi. Mera super man.
(She goes to get ready while he thinks what she wanted to tell before the accident. He smiles as he recollects her cute talk, her kiss. Manyata comes out of the washroom in her red Anarkali.) Kya soch kar muskura rahe ho woh bhi itni subah-subah??
Uday: (lost in her, snaps her fingers) umm.. Kuch nahi just a good day. Good morning princess (she nods smilingly. He goes out to get ready in his room. Just then, Jay enters and looks at Uday exiting from Manyata's room.)
Jay: (teasingly) Oho jiji..Aaj kuch zyada hi muskura rahi ho kya baat hai lagta hai raat bahut achchi guzari hai? Kisi ki baahon mein, kisi ki pyaar mein bheeg kar.. (she hugs from behind, kisses on her cheeks, Manyata beats on her arms while blushing.) Achcha Theek hai.. Hume aap ke liye sangeet aur mehendi ki outfits ke alterations ke liye jaana hoga.
(She nods and goes with Jay & Vj, same with Udnati. Soon it is the day of Sangeet. Uday tries to ask her but Manveer does not get time to meet each other as they both get busy in office work, riyasat work and wedding rituals.)
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What does Manyata wanted to tell before her accident? Is it about her love for Uday or something else?? Do tell me in the COMMENT section.
Arey Wahhh!! Its the Sangeet of Manveer!! Let's see what is going to happen on the Sangeet? Is that Andhere wala aadmi going to get exposed or.....??
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