This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Obviously was not going to give an update but thought ki jinhe humari story pasand hai unke liye toh update kar sakthi hoon..!!
I have decided that no matter how many votes and comments I get.. I will give updates as I am writing for myself, my happiness..!!
Here is the update...!!!
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All Devgarh and Jaigarh royals are seated as per Vj's invitation.
Vj: Nani Saab, Mama Sa, Mami Sa, Mom, Uncle Giri hum aap sab se kuch kehna chahte hai. (Everyone look on.) Hum kisi se pyaar karte hai aur unse hi shaadi karna chahte hai. (Manyata catches Uday's hands.)
Unnati: Hum bhi kisi se pyaar karte hai aur unse shaadi karna chahte hai.
Giriraj: Vj beta, Unnati beta kon hai jin se aap dono pyaar karte hai?
Unnati: Woh Dad.. Hum Vj se pyaar karte hai. (Everyone look at each other's faces.)
Vj: Hum bhi.. I mean hum Unnati se pyaar karte hai. (Brij-Giri get up from chairs while Unjay get nervous. Brij-Giri tap their cheeks lovingly.)
Giri: I'm happy for you both. Congratulations beta. (hugging Vj)
Manyata: So ab se Unnati ko bhi Bhabhi Sa kehna padega.. (Unnati turns pink. Manay hug Unnati.)
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Komal: Waise Unnati sirf Jay ke liye Bhabhi Sa hai kyun ki Manyata aap un se 1 saal badi hai. (Manay smile.)
Rajmata: Toh phir hume inki shaadi ki date ke liye Raj Purohit Ji ko bulana padega.
Unnati: Woh Dadi Sa hum thode din baad shaadi karna chahte hai. May be next year.. (Everyone nod agreeingly)
(After dinner, youngsters watch Vinnaithaandi Varuvaayaa. Seating order: Jay, Manyata, Uday, Unnati, Vj. Jay in the middle of the film, sleeps on Manyata's shoulders. Unjay involve in the film, while Uday simply watches Manyata's expressions while enjoying movie.)
Vj: Oh my J bhai so gayi.. (Manyata gestures shush, whispering) Khud itna excited thi movie ke liye ab aise hi so gayi.
Manyata: Vj bhai ise uski room mein sulate hai.. (Vj lifts her, She doesn't leave her hands so, M decides to sleep in J's room. Meanwhile, Udnati in Manveer room.)
Unnati: Dada.. aap subah se kuch zyada hi glow kar rahe hai. Kya hua?
Uday: (smiles) Kuch aisa jo hamesha se chahte the.. Chotti yeh batao ab tum khush ho na Vj Banna se aap ki shaadi ho rahi hai?
Unnati: Hum bahut khush hai lekin aap apne iss sudden glow ke Karan jaane begair hum yahan se nahi jayenge. Hum ne dekha Manyata bhi kuch zyada hi chamak rahi thi..
Uday: (explains how Manyata confessed that she never loved Aakash.) Ab bas hum se pyaar hone ka intezaar hai.
Unnati: Intezaar ki lamhe khatam ho gaye hai. (snaps his head) Matlab aap use apne charms se waise hi apne pyaar mein giradoge na. (he smirks)
(Next day everyone leave to Mumbai and Manyata goes to Devgarh Palace for Pag Phere Rasam. Manveer miss each other for 2 days. On the third day, Uday comes to Devgarh Palace for taking important papers from Rajmata.)
Uday: Khamma Ghani Dadi Sa.. wo actually hum yeh papers laaye hai in pe aap ke signatures chahiye aur ek nayi project hai jiske baare mein hume Vj Banna se baat karni hai.
Rajmata: Signatures tak theek hai beta lekin Vj se baat karne ke liye aap ko thodi der wait karna padega. Teeno ek dusre se aaj bet laga rahe hai ki kon sab se zyada der tak gym kar sakthe hai.. Waise thodi der mein woh log aa jayenge. (Just then, the trio come sweating and giggling.)
Manyata: Haha.. Sach mein Jay.. Khamma Ghani Dadi Sa.. Hum jeet gaye aur Vj Bhai haar gaye..
Jay: Khamma Ghani DS. Hai Uday.. Waise DS, Jiji bahut tough competitor hai. She was doing like a pro. (to Uday) I'm sure Uday tum ne sab kuch sikha diya hoga.. Am I right? (Rajmata leaves as she gets call)
Uday: Humne kuch nahi sikhaya lagta hai kisi ne kuch zyada hi observe kiya hai hume gym karte wakt? (smirks as M turns pink)
Manyata: Hum fresh ho kar aate hai. (Uday follows her as Jay and Vj leave to their rooms. He keeps a leg between as tries to close the door.) Uday tum yahan.. bahar jao mujhe fresh hona hai.. (he smirks) Theek hai bait jao main fresh ho kar aati hoon. (he sits on her bed, leaning on the headboard.)
Soon, she comes out wearing blue Anarkali with wet hair. Uday is lost in her. She wipes her hair while few droplets fall on his face. He stands close to her and pulls her hair on one shoulder. He places small kisses on her neck and turns her. He kisses on her forehead, cheeks and finally lips. He sucks her upper lip while she get shocked but slowly kisses him back. He smiles in between the kiss. They break the kiss as they go out of breath and join their forehead. Uday opens his eyes to find Manyata smiling little while going crimson. She slowly opens her eyes to find Uday looking at her mischievously.
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She runs out of the room and with a smile, she comes to dining table. Uday joins after a minute.
Rajmata: Manyata beta.. aap humare saath aaj office chaliye hume aaj ek important meeting hai.
Manyata: Ji Dadi Sa.. Hum thodi der mein office chalte hai. (Brij and Rajmata nod.)
Jay: Per DS aaj toh aakhiri din hai kal se toh Jiji Jaigarh Palace mein rehne wali hai. Hum aaj ke din saath bitana chahte hai.
Jay: Theek hai Jiji. I will get ready. (Soon, ManVeer, Jay, Vj go to office in car. Elders in another car. In Manyata's cabin, youngsters sit just then)
Ankita: (M's PA) Ma'am conference will be in 15 min. (Manyata is lost, while others nod to her.)
Manyata: (thoughtfully) Mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki kuch hone wala hai. Pata nahi ajeeb sa lag raha hai. (Others lost in thoughts.) Khair chaliye, conference ka wakt ho raha hai. (In the conference room, Rajmata, Brij-Giri talk to an old man and a young man.)
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Oh god!!! Now who are these old man and young man? Do you think they are positive characters or negative characters.. Do tell me in the COMMENTS..!!
When will Manyata tell Uday that she loves him. I am waiting..!!
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