This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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Woowww....!!!! I reached half a century!!! Congratulations to mee...!!! (*being excited*)
Here is the update..!!
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They take wedding vows and are pronounced to be husband and wife. Manyata wears a blood red and golden lehenga with heavy jewellery. Uday wears ivory white and gold sherwani with pagdi and talwar.
Uday's outfit..!!
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Manyata's outfit..!!
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Soon, They complete post wedding rituals. They meet important people in Jaigarh. Vj and Jay also go with Manyata to support in some rituals. Soon, it is time for their wedding night. Unay take her to their room which is decorated beautifully by candles & flowers. They tease her and leave when Uday makes an entry. They both demand for an 'entry fee'. Manyata stand near window, facing the moon.
Uday: Princess.. (she turns) Hume aap se kuch baat karna hai. (she nods.) Aap accident se pehle humse kya kehna chahti thi? (Looks shocked) Hum us din utt gaye the jab aap ne hume.. (taking a deep breathe) kiss kiya tha. (her ears turn pink) Aap humse kya chupa rahi hai?
Manyata: (embarrassed) Woh.. woh.. itna important baat nahi hai. Chodo na.. So jaate hai. Waise bhi bahut late ho gaya hai. (catches her wrist as she walks past him.)
Uday: Aap ne hume promise kiya ki aap humse kuch nahi chupaoge. (looks into his eyes as he looks pleadingly.)
Manyata: Theek hai. Hum batayenge lekin tumhe bura lag saktha hai kyun ki yeh baat Aakash aur mere baare mein hai. Humare rishte ka sab se bada sach hai. (he closes his fist, she makes him sit on couch.) Hum first time ek coffee shop mein mile they. Us ne wahan pe kuch documents rakh kar bhul gaya tha. Maine uske documents mein us ka number dekh kar call kiya tha unhe return karne ke liye, aise humari dosti shuru hui thi. Phir kuch din baad us ne mujhe bataya ki woh mujh se pyaar karne laga hai, us wakt mujhe laga ki woh mera achcha dost hai jo mujhe samajhta hai is se better aur kya chahiye tha. Iss liye maine uska proposal accept kiya tha. (he closes his eyes, leans back.)
