This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
Thi...
After a week, Manyata discharges from hospital. There is lot of improvement in her health though she doesn't remember anything. Ladies takes care of Manyata while Senior Gents try to find about Maya and Chowdary. Udjay spend most of the time in office, they barely meet anyone at home. Jaigarh and Devgarh families live in Devgarh Palace.
Jay develops bond with Mannati. Manyata has right hand fractured, leg with sprain, head injury and lot of bruises. Manyata thinks that her accident was due to her carelessness, nobody tells the exact truth. Uday and Manyata hardly find time for each other. Uday leaves for office early and returns late. Whenever they have some time, he would be busy with business calls or paper work.
Rajmata organizes a function for Gangaur, as it is first Gangaur for Manveer after marriage. (I hope you guys know what is Gangaur.) Mannati, Jay wear traditional ghagras.
In Manveer Room (just before pooja)
Manyata: (wears a parrot green and cherry red ghagra, comes out of the washroom with wet hair without dupatta. She couldn't pin her dupatta as her right hand is fractured. Uday is still sleeping. She finds someone outside the window, trying to enter her room through pipes.) (shouts) Uday.. utho.. Yahan pe koi hai.. (Uday wakes up, she ties dupatta around herself. He calls for guards.)
Manyata's ghagra..!!
Rất tiếc! Hình ảnh này không tuân theo hướng dẫn nội dung. Để tiếp tục đăng tải, vui lòng xóa hoặc tải lên một hình ảnh khác.
Uday: Manyata.. Princess are you sure aap ne kisi ko dekha hai? (she nods but hugs him being scared) Aap ko abhi darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Hum hai na.. (she realizes and feels embarrassed, he senses it) Hum aap ko nahi dekhenge, pehen lijiye..
Manyata: Hume phir se nahana padega.. Aap ko humne choo liya hai. (he looks confused) Are aapne aaj nahi nahaya na.. Waise aap chahe toh so jayiye abhi sirf 5 baje hai.. (guards inform that the person wearing black jacket, escaped. Uday go out to take action. Manyata calls maids and get ready.)
*Simultaneously at other side* (The black jacket man enters a mansion and informs a man sitting in dark that he couldn't harm Manyata.)
Man: (breaking a vase) Argh.. Phir se kaise bach sakthe hai woh? Hum use zinda nahi dekhna chahte. Humare manzil ke raste pe bada sa pattar hai Manyata. Ab hume kuch bada plan karna hoga.
(After some time, Pooja is done. Raj Purohit Ji informs that there must be a shanti pooja done for Manyata's health. They decide to do it after 3 weeks. After the Shanti pooja, Uday gets a call that Chowdary and Maya are caught in Bhopal and Pune respectively. After further investigation, they find out that Aryan is in Delhi. Soon after a week, Aryan is caught. All three get arrested for attempt to murder and frauds. Their illegal businesses are shut and Chowdary loses all his wealth. Rajmata calls for a family meet.. Raj Purohit Ji and Doctor Uncle also join.)
