This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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I wanted to add some Rajputani Touch to their after wedding scenes as they belong to a Royal family. I hope it is Okay..!!
Getting to the story...
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Uday's Uncle1: Uday data Hukum, aap bai sa Hukum ko naye Nath pehenayiye. (Takes out a new Nath, Uday makes her wear it but Manyata doesn't have a piercing so it pains her. Uday senses it.)
Imagine the Nath something like this.. (*New Brides are supposed to wear heavy Naths as it is believed that Nath brings lots of luck and happiness to the couple..!! Also it symbolises that the girl is now part of her husband's family.*)
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Later in Manveer Room.
(Manyata's nose is swollen and becomes red. She hisses in pain at the same time Uday walks in with a ointment.)
Uday: Princess yeh ointment se tumhe aaram milegi. Oh god yeh toh swelling ho gaya hai. Hum abhi Doctor ko bulate hai.
Manyata: Uday Doctor ki zarurat nahi hai. Subah tak mein theek ho javoongi. Aur is ointment ki bhi koi zarurat nahi hai.
Uday: What rubbish.. Tumhe ointment lagane ke liye hum pooch nahi rahe the, bata rahe the. (He applies it but Uday is scared of hurting her further and is hissing.) Jal toh nahi raha hai na?
Manyata: Nahi lekin lagta hai ki tumhe bahut Jal raha hai kaho toh tumhe bhi ointment laga doon? (Just then Unnati, Vj and Komal enter with ice, cream and lep respectively.)
Manveer: Yeh kya hai? Aap sab log itne raat ko yahan?
Vj, Unnati and Komal: Hum yeh cream/ice/lep aap ke liye laaye hai. (Manyata gets teary eyed and thanks everyone for taking care of her, while hugging each.)
Unnati: Are aap toh rone lag gayi hai..😊
Manyata: Sorry hum thodi emotional ho gaye hai.. kisi ne aaj tak hume itne pyaar se humare liye kuch nahi kiya tha..😊
Komal: Pehle aap apne aasu pooch lijiye.. aur aap ko yeh Nath lagane ki zarurat nahi hai.
Unnati: Exactly and Manyata agar kisi ne pooch toh kehe dijiye ki woh baari hai. (Everyone leaves.. Uday wonders why she got so emotional on such a small thing..)
(They change to comfortable night wear and Manyata arranges bed.)
