This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
Thi...
Uday: (stares her and thinks) Princess kya sach mein Sneha se jealous thi? Yaa phir iss liye itna gussa aaya ki Sneha ne aap ko warn kiya hai? Kya aap ko hum se pyaar ho gaya hai? Oh god princess aap hume itna surprized kaise kar leti hai? Lekin jab aap ko aise Sneha se baat karte hue dekha tha I felt so good kitna achcha hota agar aap kabhi kidnap hi na hoti ya phir kabhi Aakash se mili hi na hoti? Hum aap ko sirf apne paas rakhna chahte hai kisi se bhi share karna nahi chahte. Humare jeene ki wajah aap ho princess. Chotti and you are my lifelines.
(Manyata stirs in her sleep and keeps her hand on Uday's chest. Next day, ManVeer wake up at a time, positioned as always.)
Uday: Princess, tumhe hamesha se aise sone aadat hai kya? (Manyata looks at him confused.) Aise hum pe sone ki aadat.. (smirks)😊😉
Manyata: Hume aisi koi aadat nahi hai yeh bhi toh ho saktha hai na ki tum he hum par haath daalne ke aadat ho? (rolls her eyes, Uday confused, Manyata shows his hand which is on her waist holding her.) Haath hatao.. Hume nahana hai. (Later, Uday goes to Sneha and tells her to leave their lives for which Sneha understands his love for Manyata. She leaves to New York. Mr. Mehta apologizes on behalf of Sneha.)
(Later in the evening, Uday plans to take Manyata on a dinner date. Manveer wears a black shimmering Anarkali and white shirt, black blazer and navy blue denims.) (He gets a call from his secretary for an important file which he forgets in his cabin.)
Manyata's outfit..!!
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Uday's outfit..!!
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Manyata: Hum pehle office mein woh file leke dinner ke liye chalte hai na. Koi problem nahi hogi. (He nods, thinking that she is so understanding. Manveer go to Uday's cabin, they get locked due to carelessness of watchman. Manyata starts laughing and Uday looks confused.)
