This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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I was getting curious to know about my readers.. And It's completely fine if don't want to share..!! "Where are you from?" (*My book has crossed over 8k reads so got this bug in my mind.. Hehe!! You can answer in the INLINE COMMENTS*) Well.. I'm from Udaipur, Rajasthan. (*My place is called as 'City of Lakes', 'Venice of the East', etc.,*)
And finally... I have decided to kick Samar and Swarna with drama..!! (*Too dramatic of me..*)
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Unnati: (To Manay) Yeh Swarna aur Jagat ek dusre ko itne ache se jaante hai kya?
Manyata: Pata nahi. Tab se baat kiye ja rahe hai. Aisa lag bhi nahi raha hai ki pehle baar mile hai.
Jay: (keeps a neutral face, with attitude) Whatever (Mannati understand that she is jealous and share a smile.)
NOTE: Elders are busy in their own business as they know that they won't be enjoying in youngsters' party.
Manyata's dress for the party.. (*You're free to imagine her accessories..*)
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Uday's look for the party.. (*You're free to imagine his accessories..*)
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Unnati: Ok now Dada aur Bhabhi Sa ke liye ek chota sa test hai. In dono bowls ko dekh rahe hai na.. in mein se aap ko apne partner ke cheese dhoondh na hoga, time limit ke andar. Agar nahi dhoondh paaye toh aap ko aapke partner kuch bhi saza de sakthe hai. (Uday and Manyata look at each other with a killer smile. They start finding and the limit is 1 minute. Uday finds Manyata's earing first and Manyata finds Uday's brooch next. Uday looks at her with victorious look.)
Manyata's earrings..
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