This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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ManVeer in Pub.. Just like older times..!! Peep in to see what happens..!!
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Everyone gets ready and go in 2 cars. Karan, Unnati and Vj plan their wedding photoshoot in Mumbai. Manveer, Unnati in one car and others in another.)
Aarti, Manyata and Unnati are wearing these outfits respectively..!! (*Ignore the bags in their hands..*)
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Unnati: Dada.. Kal hum stable ja sakthe hai na? Waise bhi hum Mumbai toh parson ja rahe hai. (Uday nods in yes.) Sultan abhi bhi hai na, humne use last time 2 saal pehle dekha hai. (Uday nods in yes. While Manyata keeps looking outside ignoring their conversation.)
(Everyone enters as couple, Manveer, Unjay, Aran. Everyone goes to dance floor. Manveer are lost in each other. Tasha enters when Manyata and Aarti are talking about something.)
Tasha: Hi Manyata!! I'm Tasha. You know Unnati ki friend and also UV ki you know..😉 We had a fling. Waise tum mein aisa kya hai ki UV ki nazar hat thi nahi tum se. Are you that good in bed? (Aarti goes to inform to Uday, Unnati.)
Manyata: Mujhe pata hai ki tum kon ho aur kaisi ladki ho, so just go.. (tearfully, turns to go but Tasha catches her wrist tightly)
Tasha: You shameless bitch. Tum ne mujh se mere pyaar ko cheen liya hai. Tum jaisi low class ladkiyon ko achchi tarah se jaanti hoon. You gold digger, bloody slut tum Uday ki money ke liye itni niche gir gayi ho ki..Disgusting.. (Manyata pushes her and runs crying)
(Uday reaches to Tasha while Vj slaps her as she calls Manyata with names, they try to find Manyata)
Goon1: Kaha chali Madam. Lagta hai madam ka dil toot gaya hai, aap chaho toh hum aapki madad kar sakthe hai, Kyun bhaiyon? (she screams for help, road is deserted.)
Goon2: Aap ki cheekon ka koi jawab nahi milega.. Haha.. (They try to kiss her, she dodges it)
Manyata: Help.. Madad kijiye.. Help me please.. (Uday listen to her screams but doesn't see her face. He thrashes goons, Karan and Vj see that it's Manyata, Uday comes to Manyata only to find her in unconscious state, Arti is a doctor)
Arti: Jiju Sa.. Lagta hai Jiji unconscious hai. Unki pulse bhi high hai. Hume unhe calm karna hoga. Aur humne aap sab ko pura sach nahi bataya hai. Wahan pe Tasha ne Jiji se.. (she narrates everything)
Karan: Bhai. Hum Bhabhi ko hospital bhi nahi le ja sakthe.. Media ko pata chalega toh bahut badi nuisance karenge.
Arti: Hum ghar le jayenge na. Mera pura kit wahi hai. Hum Jiji ko wahi se treat karenge.
Karan: Bhai. I'm sorry. Humari wajah se yeh sab ho gaya nahi hum Jaipur aate aur nahi yeh sab hota..☹
Uday: It's okay Karan. It's not your fault. Hume jaldi ghar jaana hoga. (They reach home. Arti gives an injection, Vj and Uday stay by Manyata's side. Soon, Manyata wakes up)
Manyata: (in semi-conscious state) Hmm.. Uday.. Uday.. No.. Please save me.. Mujhe chodiye.. Please no.. (Uday feels bad to see her, Manyata doesn't leave Uday's hand, Unjay tear up) (Manyata wakes up completely and hugs Uday as soon as she see him..) Uday un logo ne mujhe (hiccups) kiss karne (hiccups) ki koshish (hiccups) Ah.. (hiccups) aur Tasha ne mujhe (hiccups) (Everyone leave them)
Uday: Shh.. (makes her drink water) Princess hum yahi hai. Aapko kisi se bhi dar ne ki zarurat nahi hai. Woh goons police ke pass hai. Rahi baat Tasha ki toh humne uski jagah dikha di hai. Don't worry. (Manyata sleeps due to medicine, Uday wipes his tears and offs the light.)
Vj, Unnati: Sab theek hai na Uday banna/Dada. Manyata so rahi hai na? (Uday nods and tells everything.)
Karan: Bhai. Un logo ko police ne arrest kar diya hai. Humne Jaipur ke commissioner se baat ki hai. (Uday nods.) (He goes inside to find Manyata sleeping with frown, he immediately hugs her and sleeps, Uday wakes up first and looks at his princess sleeping position: her hands on his chest, legs tangled. She snuggles more into his chest and finally wakes up.)
Uday: Good morning Wifey..😉
Manyata: (dully) Hm.. Good morning.. Mujhe ready hona hai. (Uday places a forehead kiss and leaves to work out.) (Uday, Karan, Unnati and Vj are in gym. They plan to surprize Manyata to lighten her mood.)
(Everyone is chatting happily and having breakfast but Manyata just plays with food. Later Uday takes breakfast for Manyata in their room.)
Uday: Princess Khaana khao.. Hum thodi der mein stable jayenge. Wahan khaana ke liye kuch nahi milega. (Manyata doesn't respond and is towards window, Uday turns her to find her crying very badly, she hugs him.)
Manyata: Maine tumhe (hiccups) tumhe money (hiccups) ke liye shaadi nahi (hiccups) ki hai. Mein gold (hiccups) gold digger nahi hoon..(hiccups) (He breaks the hug.)
Uday: Kisne kaha ki tum ne hum se money ke liye shaadi ki hai? Princess Tasha ne kuch.. (angrily) Hum use jail mein daal denge.. How dare she?
Manyata: Tumhe nahi lagta ki maine tum se money ke liye..(hiccups) I mean you don't believe ki mein.. (He hugs her)
Uday: I will never believe whatever they say.. Okay (He feeds her. Unnati walks in..)
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Sorry for a SHORT update..!!
I feel like to punch that Tasha..!! Anyways Uday will take care of her..!!
I loved the way Uday was taking care of Manyata. Uday is feeding Manyata..!! They are being so mushy-mushy..!!
(in Yuvraj Udayveer Singh's voice) Haaye how cute...!!
Who are those goons? What do you think? Please do tell me in COMMENT SECTION..!
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