This is first time, I'm writing a story. Though, I have been a silent reader.
Strictly no hate comments but I would definitely appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions.
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Story in Hinglish..!! (*Hindi dialogues, written in English*)
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SURPRISE from Writer Sahiba..!! Wanted to write this as Epilogue but changed my mind as I could not write continuation part..!!
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Everyone is sitting in Jaigarh Palace while Manyata is crying alot. Jay tries to handle a 1.5 year old Abhay. Unnati, Jagat and Vj try to console a crying Karan.
Uday: (in call, shouting) I don't care hume humara beta wapis chahiye, officer. He is future Yuvraj of Jaigarh, Rajkumar Aditya Veer Singh. Aap aisa kaise keh sakthe hai ki woh kahi nahi mil rahe hai. I want him in 5 hours. Do you understand that..!!
Manyata: (crying) Sab humari galati hai, Ma. Hume use pick karne jaana chahiye tha. Subah bhi humne use daant diya tha.
*Flashback* (Morning: Uday is talking about some business deal to Giriraj while Aditya as usual, whinning to bunk school. Abhay is with his nanny.)
Manyata: (sternly) Duggu!! Chup chaap apna breakfast finish karo. Hum 5 minutes mein aakar check karenge. (goes to check Abhay)
Aditya: Dad!! (showing his best puppy eyes)
Giriraj: Aadi aaj aap ko Hum khilaayenge warna aap ki Mom aa jayegi. Fast..!! (Aditya runs to Giriraj with his cereal bowl and Giriraj feeds him. After some time, Uday and Giriraj feed him while Aditya is cranky.)
Manyata: (surprised) Are Waah!! Aapne breakfast finish kar diya. Very good, Duggu.
Aditya: Mom humne breakfast kar diya hai na. Toh kya aaj hum ghar pe reh sakthe hai? (with a cute innocent face)
Manyata: Hume achche tumhare saare tricks pata hai, Duggu. Aaj aisa kuch nahi chalega waise bhi Saturday bunk karke kya milega. Aur aaj toh half day school hai. (Uday and Giriraj chuckle at their banter.)
Aditya: Mom please.. (showing puppy face)
Manyata: Nahi..
Aditya: Please Mom..
Manyata: Nahi (This goes on for sometime..)
Aditya: Please na Mom.. Hum good boy ki tarah aap ki har baat manenge.
Manyata: Theek hai, Monday tum ghar pe raho, Okay. Aaj Dada Saheb, Dad aur hum important kaam se bahar ja rahe hai. Okay? (Aditya hugs her.)
Aditya: You're the best Mom. I love you Mom. (Manyata hugs him and takes him to car. Uday and Giriraj nod their heads, thinking that it's everyday drama of Aditya.) Bye Mom. (Manyata kisses him and bids bye.)
*Flashback Ends* (Manyata cries thinking of Aditya, hugging his photo. Komal and Unnati try to console her while Jay along with maids feed crying Karan and cranky Abhay. Brijraj and Giriraj leave to talk to commissioner. Jagat, Uday and Vj are at Aditya's school, checking CC TV footage and checking on near-by places.)
Just then, a man in his late 50s get Aditya, who is crying and his school uniform, dirtied. Others are shocked upon seeing the man while Manyata ignores the man and runs to Aditya.
Manyata: Duggu!! Aap theek hai na. (checking for wounds) Aap ko kahi chott nahi lagi na..!! (kissing him and hugging him.) Thank You (looking at the man, she gets shocked and instantly anger arouses.) Aap??
The person is revealed to be... MURARI LAL
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