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chapter 1
can we just talk about the opening paragraph?
"i earned my first bronze ring on the dawn of my fifteenth birthday. it had been a slice to the throat. quick, clean."
she killed someone but the whole painting imagery ugh it's so well written
the cops got a body already
andrea alscott heir to the east-side 👀 murderer
isaac in viper gang
✨prince✨
oh, he's the leader...
can he let go of her already?
yess queen 🤜isaac
first off what a great first chapter👏 👏👏
beautifully written
very excited for the next chapter

chapter 2
let's get into ittt
it is forbidden for east-siders to cross over to the west
ruling gang - salva
he has sun-kissed cheeks but muddy green eyes
"are you sure you don't need help"

hmm he knows exactly what she wants
"something about him was familiar" he knows who you are i think
see he does
wren haines, seth's brother (her close friend)
he winking at her
"you're insufferable"
i'm sensing some chemistry
ha nice ending
another good chapter i'm gonna try not to say it after every chapter otherwise it's too repetitive

chapter 3
prince sends her heels for beating up isaac
um just don't wear it and stop complaining
so prince is jack?
both brothers sound hot 🥵
now who's lying?
i think seth likes her
jack harris a competing heir for the east-side
her mom is killed by the west-side king rip

chapter 4
his breath hitched 🥺
my mans stuck in the friendzone
major simp he would die for her if it meant she would always be in his life
oh bonnie clyde is the minx
nice to read about seth's thoughts and feelings and how well he knows andrea

chapter 5
now i wanna know what happened between bonnie and andrea
"he knelt on a knee and kissed it"
oh i see so prince and minx = couple
bonnie is really not a fan of her is she jelly?
"i felt slightly more comfortable knowing he was there" good, that man would protect you with his life
yes stop interrupting her!
work together? as long as there is no 'marriage contract' involve because i don't like you jack
"marry me" ofc that's the answer to everything
yass queen speak up
"i could very well safe myself"
love me a 👏 strong 👏 independent 👏 woman 👏

chapter 6
5am? thank you next
hounslow is one of her father's higher-ranking subordinates
she likes being the centre of everything
"he'd even missed my birthday" same
she's still in school?

chapter 7
oh look its isaac
west-side has been bribing scouts
isaac is 15? whaat
and wren was watching everything *smirks*
andrea: "i suppose i could torture it out of you"
wren: "let me take you out"
rocky go get sanders- who is sanders?
yeah same girl i don't trust him yet

chapter 8
i wonder what happened between the brothers
at least she's honest with seth, i hope he is too
seth haines pov
so their parents died and wren moved to the grandparents
aww seth
"his loyalty was to her" repeatedly... or is it

 or is it

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