pumpkin
by ASillyGirlInAsgardcompleted : -
rating : -
tw⚠️ : abuse, language, sexual content, sexual abuse, substance abuse, underage drinkingchapters : 21 (ongoing)
age group : young adult
genre : fanficrepresentation : -
summary :
in which melody boudreaux falls in love with
jj maybank. all while going on a dangerous treasure hunt to find missing gold.notes :
i enjoyed watching obx but it's not my fav. it's a good teen drama with some mystery and romance in it. and like the basic bitch that i am, i love jj.i've been reading so many 1st pov it's weird reading 3rd pov. i like the cover, title and summary its short and simple.
my only negative apart from grammar errors is the lack of description. not necessarily the characters but their actions as well as the setting. therefore i found it difficult to get sucked into the book. idk maybe i explained myself better in the raw reactions.
i read the first five chapters and i'm interested in reading how you changed the plot. i hope you don't stick entirely to the script and change things up.
i wish you the best and keep on writing!
#p4l
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