Not an update I'm sorry everyone, but I wanted to ask for feedback on how I can improve my writing.
I know I'm not the best writer, and most people on the internet are too nice to say, "hey, maybe you could do this, instead of that, to make your writing flow better!"
All feedback is appreciated, from plot to grammar ^^
Obviously, please keep it as constructive criticism, any negative/hateful comments will be deleted.
Thank you in advance!
- Crystal <3
p.s. I don't know who the artist is, so if someone knows, please tell me so I can give them credit ^^
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