Hello, my fellow readers and writers.
Are you a writer, tired of messaging different people and telling them to read your book?
Or
Are you a reader looking for books written by new writers, hoping to see new ideas and concepts?
If you fall in either...
I have three simple words to describe the title: Nice, short and sweet.
Cover:
The cover is amazing. I loved the font although it's a little hard to read the subtitle. It would be great if you made the font a bit simpler as compared to the font used at the moment.
Blurb:
It is nice as it tells us Mia is hiding a lot of things and Landon comes in a twisted situation. However Landon did not give things away and that was a special point..
Hook:
The first sentence doesn't hook me but it's not an overused cliche phrase either. Thus, the hook is a segment of speech that can be improved on.
Grammar & Spelling:
I didn't catch any grammar or spelling issues and neither did my editing app. So superb job, Nat!
Flow:
It flowed well. Your word choices are perfect and were like a cherry on the top.
Enjoyment:
Mia is a doll. I love her and Kaci's relationship. I can't wait to continue reading and see how things will progress among Sims, Desiree, and Mia.
Overall, I am impressed by the book. I am looking forward to reading more of the author's writings in the future...
RUBRIC FOR JUDGEMENT:-
Title: 10/10
Cover:9/10
Blurb:10/10
Hook:14/15
Grammar and Spelling:20/20
Flow:20/20
Emjoyment:15/15
Total: (98/100)
***Please take the criticism in a positive manner.***
~JULEOVE(THE REVIEWER)
~THE BOOK CAFE
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