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It's cute and I love how you don't show their face so readers can still picture the characters.
Blurb-5/5
It tells us how it's about teenagers and one has a secret past without giving away the secret. So we know it's going to be a nice classic cliché which I love as much as the next person. (5/5)
Content-5/5
You hooked me in, and we can feel Leo's frustration as he digs his fingers into the leather seat.
Originality-10/10
I have read a lot of teen fiction (YA/NA) and I have read nothing where the guy is a new student before. So it's a breath of fresh air.
Character development-13/15
I have only read the first ten chapters and there don't seem to be any changes in the characters
Grammar & Spelling-20/20
There were no spelling errors that my eyes caught and the grammar was good as well.
Flow-20/20
The story flows well, you kept the chapters short and sweet, which is great for Wattpad.
Enjoyment-20/20
I enjoyed my ride so far and will return to see how the characters and their relationship develop.
Total: 98/100
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