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The title and the blurb are extremely intriguing. It's just the cover that requires a relevant change in my opinion.
Grammar And Vocabulary: 19/20
The grammar and vocabulary are satisfactory but since there's always room for improvement, the punctuation and basic words such as "said" or "told" can be worked on positively.
Character Development: 15/15
No changes required.
Plot originality: 10/10
No changes required. I found the originality of the plot really impressive.
Plot Development: 15/15
No changes required. The smooth flow and development of the plot was immensely
Reader Enjoyment: 10/10
From a reader's point of view, the book has been written beautifully. Just by working on the cover and punctuations, your book would evolve further, leaving all the errors behind. Making these modifications would improve and eliminate the sources of error, bringing the book closer to perfection.
TOTAL: 77/80
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~THE BOOK CAFE
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