I think we can all safely say that this task was a roller coaster.
Let's see how you did!
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Tribute 2: Mai Li
Score: 11
Feedback: I legit cried. Like this entry gave me anxiety.
Tribute 3: Skye Finley
Score: 0
Feedback: y u do dissss
Tribute 4: Neha Bhavsar
Score: 9
Feedback: I liked the amount of detail, and the escalation of the overall mood. You have redeemed yourself :).
Capitol 1: Gus Octavius
Score: 5
Feedback: Even though the entry came off poetic, it was really short. Try to add more detail by describing things more expressively.
Capitol 2: Vix Rojas
Score: 8
Feedback: A very good entry, however I thought it was a little fast paced. Not bad though.
Capitol 3: Luna Jordan
Score: 10
Feedback: I liked how descriptive the deaths were, as well as the increased build of guilt that is effecting your character.
Capitol 6: Berenice Vipointe
Score: 11
Feedback: I loved how you incorporated the effects of the previous events on the group, as well as creating multiple conflicts throughout the entry.
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Author Games: Renegade | CLOSED
Random(CLOSED) The tributes have escaped. A Gamemaker is captured. The Capitol is slowly turning to chaos. With the help of a few outsiders, and the rumor of a secret rebel group's base, will the remaining tributes of the 80th Games be able to make it to...
