Review: She was Different

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Reviewed by: jash_parikh

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Cover: The background is good but the title is cut a bit from the left. Author's name is not visible due to poor font selection. For this you get 0.8/1.

Title: Unique but quite plain. Nothing too bad, nothing too good. For this you get 0.75/1.

Description: Multiple errors in punctuation. Doesn't scream for me to pick up the book. There are grammatical errors at some places. Again, nothing extra ordinary or under ordinary. For this you get 0.75/1.

Beginning: Again punctuation errors aplomb, grammar errors aplenty. The language used is bland and monotonous, the dialogues seem a bit emotionless. This wasn't at all successful in keeping me engrossed. The plot is decent. Your style of writing needs improvement...if that happens you can become great. For all this you get 0.95/2.

Your total score is: 3.25/5.

THIS BOOK HAS BEEN JUDGED MODERATELY, NEITHER TOO HARSHLY NOR TOO LENIENTLY. FOR ANY QUESTIONS OR QUERIES FEEL FREE TO PM ME.

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