Jash_parikh

Review: You Make My Heart Leap

Reviewed by: jash_parikh

We will start your review in a specific order...

Cover: A decent collage, nothing extra ordinary or dull. For this you get 0.9/1.

Title: Too cheesy, too cliche. For this you get 0.8/1.

Description: Sweet lines, but where is the info about your book? Only the first line, which may not be enough to get readers. I felt you should've at least given some info about either your characters or the situation/setting in which your story takes place. For this you get 0.8/1.

Beginning: Looks too mainstream content, interesting plot and o grammar mistakes. I have nothing to tell you here except maybe that since you're writing a novel just try using that kind of language too. There is no description, poor detailing and all in all doesn't quite look like a novel/book. Don't go too soon into events, it's fine to take some time into plot and character building. For this you get 1/2.

Your total score is: 3.5/5.

THIS BOOK HAS BEEN JUDGED MODERATELY, NEITHER TOO HARSHLY NOR TOO LENIENTLY. FOR ANY QUESTIONS OR QUERIES FEEL FREE TO PM ME.