Written by: heyits_iris
Reviewed by Sarah
Cover
I'm sorry...just no. I don't see the whole concept? The cover doesn't go with your story. I highly recommend you change it.
Summary
That description is lacking everything. It's literally two sentences and that's it. That must be redone and it needs to be more descriptive. Give it a big nudge like. At the moment, it's making me not wanting to give the story a chance.
Opinion
I kinda like the layout but then I don't. I feel like you should add more to the messages. Perhaps you can add the time the messages were sent? Give it a bit more realism. Add a bit more detail. I found it quite jumbled up, the more I went through chapters. Honestly this messaging story needs a major reboot.
Overall
I just have no words, it needs more detail.
NEGATIVES
●Cover
●Details
●Description
●Layout
●Author notes
POSITIVES
●STORY idea
TIPS
●Try adding time
●Change and experiment with different layouts.
☆Keep on writing☆
Sarah
3/10
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