Written by: 8danielle9
Reviewed by Sarah
Cover
I really love that Cover! You've done an amazing job with it fair play. I love the use of colours. It blends really well
Description
The description disappointed me, to me it doesn't exactly make sense.
Story
I'm genuinely shocked that your even asking for a review because form my point you honestly sound like a published author. I can't find anything wrong with the way you've written. I only advise you to make your chapters a little bit shorter as they seem a bit to long. Try making more chapters?
Overall
I think this is a great story and I hope to read more stories from you in the future. I do advise you to do author notes to engage more with your readers.
Negatives
●Description
●Length of chapters
●Author notes
POSITIVES
●Writing style
●Description
●Cover
TIPS
● I advise you to write author notes to engage more your readers.
●By making your chapters shorter, you won't make your readers so tired Therefore they will continue reading.
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