Reviewed by Khloe
Story by Empresspenguin
Cover
I quite like the cover although it doesn't catch my eye and I know that you shouldn't judge a book by its cover and all but we all do it so I feel like the cover should be more captivating and intriguing.
Description
I kinda like this description but it doesn't intrigue me. I feel like there should be a cliffhanger that interests me into reading into the story and I feel like you should add in some more about the actual story.
Story
I think this is a good story and a good storyline. I just feel like it could be a little bit more descriptive. Other than that it's really good :)
Khloe xo
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