Reviewed by Khloe
Story by Black_panther31
Cover
I like this cover actually but I'm not sure it goes with the story. If there is a part with some woods/forest area and fog then yes it would go but I'm not entirely sure.
Description
I feel like there could be a lot more to this description. Right now it isn't telling me much about the story. All I am getting from this is that Khloë's mother dies when she was only a couple weeks old and that the father talks about her a bit but I don't know what the story is about and therefore I am not sure if I want to read it in case it isn't the genre of story that I like so maybe add in a little more about the story.
Story
Wow. I love your storyline, it seems so interesting and enticing. I think that maybe after you have done a chapter you should go over it first to check for any slights mistakes before you publish it.
From me
You are you very talented with your writing I do have to say. You should carry on writing 100% :)
Khloe xo
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