Reviewed by Khloe
Story by voidsarahh
Cover
I like this cover. It looks really good and I like how smooth you added in the clown into the balloon, it's a really good idea and it goes very well. The only two things that I see wrong are that I would say to change the font of your title to make it look less sweet and innocent and maybe tone it down to a darker thing so that it goes with the aesthetic of the cover and also another thing I've spotted is that I can't see your authours name very clearly so I would change the font to make it look more readable and I would also make it a few sizes larger so that people can read it and see it clearly.
Description
This description is very very very short and I feel that it needs to be longer and more about the story and what happens so that you get more readers and more people to be interested in your story.
Story
I like this story and where you are going with it I just think you should make the chapters a little bit shorter as some people don't exactly like reading long chapters and that's all really.
Khloe xo
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