Reviewed by Khloe
Story by Alana2215
Cover
I like this cover but then I feel like you should change the colour of the author's name because it is blending a little bit too much in with the background and looks odd so if I was you I would make the colour darker.
Description
I really like this description. It has everything you possibly need. Good spacing, a look into what the story is about and it makes me want to read the story so well done there.
Story
I like this story, I don't see much wrong with it other than saying that you don't need to use a lot of 'big words' when you describe something but apart from that there isn't anything wrong.
Khloe xo
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