Revolution by Nightravenxx

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Title: Revolution

Author: nightravenxx

Genre: Poetry

Grammar/Spelling: 7/10

Emotion/Feelings: 10/10

Creative: 9/10

Title: 6/10

Originality: 10/10

Honest Opinion Of The Story:
Good. Could use some more positivity. She mentions in the beginning, "For the fighters how don't hold swords and shields as we see warriors as," It's truly meaningful and beautiful like the rest of the poems.

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