The Oracle In The Dust by TrioTheThird

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Title: The Oracle In The Dust

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Title: The Oracle In The Dust

Author: triothethird

Genre: Teen Fiction

Focus: Grammar

Title: 5/5

Cover: 5/5

Blurb: 10/10

Grammar: 19/20

Plot: 17/20

Character Development: 18/20

Original: 20/20

Total: 94/100

Honest Review:

The story started off great, but the more I read it felt like you were rushing some things. Don't get me wrong, the story is good but again, it seemed a little rushed. Also, I do recommended going back because you did have a few errors. Other than that, I do like the story so please keep writing.

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Thank you triothethird for the amazing story.

Thank you MissMysteriousGirl1 for the amazing review.

Thank you MissMysteriousGirl1 for the amazing review

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