Title: The Oracle In The Dust
Author: triothethird
Genre: Teen Fiction
Focus: Grammar
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 10/10
Grammar: 19/20
Plot: 17/20
Character Development: 18/20
Original: 20/20
Total: 94/100
Honest Review:
The story started off great, but the more I read it felt like you were rushing some things. Don't get me wrong, the story is good but again, it seemed a little rushed. Also, I do recommended going back because you did have a few errors. Other than that, I do like the story so please keep writing.
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Thank you triothethird for the amazing story.
Thank you MissMysteriousGirl1 for the amazing review.
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