Unexpectations by TrioTheThird

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Title: Unexpectations 

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Title: Unexpectations 

Author: triothethird

Genre: Fantasy

Title: 5/5

Cover: 3.5/5

Blurb: 4/10

Grammar: 11/20

Plot: 19/20

Character Development: 18/20

Original: 19.5/20

Total: 80/100

Honest Review: 

This book was amazing. The title was wonderful, the blurb was so captivating, but it had too many grammatical errors. Also, the cover was plain but it went with the blurb so I didn't mind much. I adored the storyline, I liked it was original. I'm going to read the book if the writer can take my corrections and edit. The characters were lovely. They weren't fictionally based and I could relate with them even from the brief interaction. The MC was also really good. The characters, in general, were described well enough. I really like this book and I wish it only had better grammar. The grammatical errors lay mainly in the tenses. I hated how the writer kept switch from past to tense and not using them well. It was a total bummer. This work was impressive, and to you the writer, you can strive better, but I have to say: Well done!

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Thank you Starrlite101 for the amazing review

Thank you Starrlite101 for the amazing review

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