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Making Deals With The Devil by xoxchloeBxox

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Title: Making Deals With The Devil

Author: xoxChloeBxox

Genre: Teen Fiction

Title: 4/5

Cover: 5/5

Blurb: 10/10

Grammar: 18/20

Plot: 20/20

Character Development: 19/20

Original: 18/20

Total: 94/100

Honest Review:

I do want to point out a few things about your story. It isn't bad but, I really wouldn't call the story, "Making Deals With The Devil" it's more like, "Making A Deal With Mr. Jerk." Also, make sure you tag the story with 'Humor', because it was indeed funny to me at least. Your grammar wasn't the best, nor bad, but go back to proofread the chapters to fix those errors. Please update soon, I am enjoying your story.

Thank you MissMysteriousGirl1 for the amazing review!