So here we are.
Finally, I have finished what I started. A project that took 7 months, with 2 of them months being no updates. Either way, im proud of what I have created.
I think the book and plot came out well, and I'm happy with my OC and AU.
I think I will make a prequel. The story of VOID and how they became a monster of the void.
Haven't thought of the name yet though.
I will also go back and polish some of the crappy old chapters as well.
So thanks for sticking around. Whether you've been here from the early days of the book, or you came when it was already finished...
Thanks for reading.
As of right now, this book has an incredible 18.1K reads. That's insane.
It's just crazy that a random person like me can create a book on a website and have people read, enjoy and praise it.
So thank you. For reading.
This marks the ending for Undertale:Secrets.
Hey let's do a retrospective
It's currently Friday 15 June which is like, a while after I finished this. I loved this book but it could have been way WAY WAY better written. Towards the end, I feel like the plot was rushed and the jokes became dull and the book was overall wasted potential. If I wanted, I could rewrite this and make it tons better but I've realised recently that starting too many ambitious projects when you are way too busy and pushing yourself to create lacklustre content is awful. And I've noticed that when im going back and placing filler words just to hit my 1000-word quota should signify that I should stop.
Anyway, back to the book. Its good, I like the plot and I think (for the first half at least) that I wrote Sans pretty good. And there was some good moments and it really shows how much motivation the start of the book had and how little effort was put into the end segments. Also Gaster Fraction or whatever the name was, was a shitty character like was such a disappointment. Oh yeah, the entire secrets theme was barely explored like it's the name of the book and you messed it up how did I do that?
Anyway 4/10 A for effort ig bye 👋
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Undertale:Secrets
FanfictionSans has had an interesting past. A past that even his beloved brother barely even knows of. A past that he wishes could remain a secret. But when the questions start being asked, what does he do? These questions seem so little, yet they cause so mu...
