Sorry for not actually releasing a chapter I just wanted to ask.
1.Do you guys like the story so far? If so please comment your favorite moment :)
2. What would you point out in the story that I could make better?
3. What do you think I should focus on to improve my writing?
That's all. Sorry If I had gotten your hopes up. I just wanted to know so that I could also grow.
I hope you have a wonderful day :)
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