Treasures (Poetry Book Number Two)

Free Verse

"I look at you
You were looking at her
My heart couldn't get
Any more broken

I look at you
You were talking to her
My eyes couldn't fall
Any more tears

I look at you
You were holding her hand
My hands are shaking
I couldn't make it stop

I look at you
You looked back
My heart is aching
My eyes are crying
My hands are shaking

You looked away
And never looked back."

Hey guys! So I tried making a free verse and this happened. Please tell me what you think.

Yours truly,
Z.