Treasures (Poetry Book Number Two)

Thorns Of A Rose

Hey
I did not see you there
You were always beside me
But honestly
I never really felt your presence
We were always together
You said you loved me
You kissed me softly
You always held my hand
But boy
I never felt your love
What I felt was
Insanity
Madness
And dejection
You are like the thorns
Every rose has one
When I see a rose
I don't feel you
I only do
When I prick my hand
And I feel the hurt
I only feel your hurt not love

I only tried this. Hehe :) do you guys think I should write like this more?