Yes indeed YES INDEED! A Naruto fanfic has been chosen for our first critique. Naruto was the first anime we watched so it only seemed appropriate. We'll be scouring Wattpad for gut-wrenching Mary Sues to add to this book of atrocities. So prepare y...
Honestly, I have been dead. No really, I've been busy with work, but same thing, AMIRIGHHHHHTTT
I'm pretty sure college and work are like the satanic version of peanut butter and jelly.
After this conversation, Milo proceeded to get extremely sick and develop a high grade fever. I rubbed his back for like an hour until he was able to go home. TRUE TRASH HOMIES.
Todayyyyyyyy is yet another special dayyyyyyyy because we have a Sue suggestion. The story is called The Mask by Zombiez_Plus_Brainz, suggested by fandom_otaku0735. This is the author's first fic so I'm seriously going to try and tone it down a bit this time. Gotta recognize that first attempts are usually a train wreck. This story has more problems with OOC cannon characters than Mary Sueishness.
There's also a legion of mindless, squawking fangirls threatening to kill Sakura in the comments. Literally over a hundred screaming like five year olds. Fantastic.
I need to point out a small bit of the description before we begin.
Naruto Uzumaki, everyone's favorite knuckle-head ninja, wears a mask. Unlike Ichigo from Bleach who wears his mask to level up,
Level... level up? Bruh this is a level up:
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Ichigo does not "level up". Bleach never uses that terminology. Not even once. This is Kamen Rider Ex-Aid, a game based on defeating video game viruses that infect actual people. These characters level up with gashats and a game driver. This is how you use the term level up. It's also coincidentally the best Kamen Rider show I have ever seen in my life.
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Seriously. I normally find the whole clunky costume and ridiculous monster design thing old, but this is on a whole 'nother level. Can't recommend it enough. Also, there is one poor fucker that transforms into a bike instead of a human. He literally has to ask people to "ride him". Lost my shit as soon as I heard that.
