Maestro
by @iamnyasha
Let's hop into this! I really enjoyed this story! Thank you for the review. The book had great imagery. The grammar didn't always follow as well. Despite this, the descriptions and the story itself had a very smart tone and understanding. It was a very formal work! The protagonist seemed detached from the world, as there's a drastic change from how they think and speak compared to the rest of the characters. Also, during involving conflicts with the main character, these large descriptions disappear. I'm not sure this is intended, but it does work very well! If it isn't intended, it could go wrong, growing either too boring or too confusing. Anyway, I'd spend a bit more time editing the story. Making sure most everything is corrected. Also, just spend some time asking the purpose of each paragraph, as each one should have a purpose. Good luck, and I hope you do well in your journey as an author! I'd definitely recommend you!
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LosoweWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
