Obsidian Hearts
by @MariaMansfield
Minor vagueness
I am a fan of Jane Austen's work. At the beginning of this story, it seemed a little too close to her works. Though, the story's bio, flow, and grammar were nicely done. The book had mystery and buildup. Only every now and then did I not understand the character's reactions. That was all I had an issue with. This was an entertaining read that brought back fond memories. The story did twist, of course. I wish you had more done when I read it, as I know the story will go somewhere. There's just not enough written to show where it's going. Good luck on later chapters. I hope your book gets the attention it deserves.
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RandomWhat you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a perfect story) 3. I'm open to fan fiction. It'll just take me a while to review...
